While reading Tompkins chapter on writer’s craft, I
began to think about the way that I learned how to write in school. Tompkins
(2019) explains the
elements of writers craft as: ideas, organization, voice, word choice,
sentence fluency, conventions, and presentation. I remember my
teachers taking a lot of time talking about the elements ideas, organization
and conventions but not talking about the other 4 elements. They did
multiple mini lessons on the importance of brainstorming an idea and then
organizing your information for the idea before writing it. They would always
tell us to look back at our writing to correct any errors we had in our writing
but never had us specifically look at the words we choose, the voice we used of
how the sentence flowed. I can now see how that experience has
impacted me as I write now.
The idea and organization elements are fairly easy
elements for me to understand whether it’s writing or reading. I always take
the time to think of the ideas I want to write about before I start to write
them. I sometimes find it difficult to figure out the idea of an article when
reading digitally because there can be a lot of information that might not be
related to what the topic is about. While reading
digitally, the author might include hyperlinks that take you to another
page that gives you more back ground information on the topic they are writing
about. While that is useful, I feel like it makes it harder for me to have a
concrete idea of what the text is about. While reading traditional text, I
don’t have to worry about switching to another source and getting distracted. I
was taught that your ideas should flow together so that the reader can easily
move through your writing. I will admit that now days I tend to do the
organization part after I have written my entire paper. I find it easier to see
the organization element within traditional text since the ideas are usually
separated into paragraphs, pages, or chapters. In digital text, the only way to
switch an idea is by having them in separate paragraphs. I occasionally find it
hard to see where one paragraph ends and where one starts. This makes it hard
to know if they are talking about the same idea or switching to a new
one.
I find voice,
word choice, sentence fluency, and conventions to be a little difficult when it
comes to writing. I always struggle to find the right words to use or the right
sentence to say. I can usually recognize the elements while I am reading. I
find an article to be more interesting and easier to read if it has a variety
of words and I can hear the voice of the author. I will admit that I am not a
strong speller and so when I first start writing I don’t worry about spelling
and conventions. While I reread my writing at the end, I take the time to fix
any errors I might have. I have a hard time reading both traditional and
digital text if there are a lot of conventional errors in the writing. My eyes
will go straight to the error and I won’t understand anything that I read.
The publishing element is an element that I try to
use as much as possible. After I am done with the actual writing part, I spend
some time with layout to figure out how I want my writing to look. The way my
writing looks depend on what I’ve wrote about and who the audience is. I think
the way a piece or writing is shown says a lot about the author’s personality.
No matter if I’m reading traditional text or if I am reading
digital text, take the time to notice how the author is displaying their
writing.
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T. (2013). Crafting digital writing. Portsmouth,
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Lambert, K. Helping students find “voice” in their writing. Education world,
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G. E. (2019). Teaching writing: Balancing
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Stephanie, your realization that "I find voice, word choice, sentence fluency, and conventions to be a little difficult when it comes to writing. I always struggle to find the right words to use or the right sentence to say" is very interesting to me.
ReplyDeleteI see this list as having two different focus. Obviously the sentence fluency and conventions have to do with issues of correctness and making your text readable. However, voice and word choice have much more to do with the writer's awareness of the intricacies of the topic she is writing about and who the piece is for. I wonder, when it comes to voice and word choice, is it "school writing" that you have the hardest time with? Is it something about writing to a teacher (thinking about writing what "they" want to hear versus what "you" want to say?)